Upon receiving feedback I was instructed to make the circles more uniformed and move the text “Eben Sorkin” slightly to the left and to also move the text “Merriweather” slightly to the right and make it bigger, my tutor then advised that I make the text within the yellow circles the same width as the yellow circles, and instead of using random letters I could form words with the letters; I applied all the feedback to my work and to be frank I like the outcome of this type specimen